“vanishing point’ by Lawrence Raab, English homework help

the problem with the writing is that it is too much summery and there is no showing of the meaning of the poem and what the meesege of the poem and how the writer use words and ideas to tell as about his thoughts. on other words make the wring I sent to real good analysis that has strong one sentences thesis. Also make sure to explain what the writier mean to us on each thing he said

17 file = the writing should be fix

20 file =  more information about the work