Richard Wright’s Native Son, English homework help

I upload my essay and the outline. The essay is about Fear , Fear in Richard Wright’s  Native Son, Chapter (Fear),

1-I need you to make the essay shorter than this but (five paragraphs).

2- I need you to edit the thesis statement on the essay and the planning page.

3- I upload the planning page (one I used and the other one is blank to use it) I need you to edit it ,  and to do number (4) on another page. I upload a picture example.

4- I need you to edit the outline. the professor don’t want full sentences on the outline.