How can I make this sonnet more A shakespear Sonnet, what is it missing?
A smell that captivates miles away
A shine of pleasant grease
A feel of cotton dough
A feel of the warm box
It’s sauce and toppings
And cheese
Are heaven in my mouth
And Are what makes me delighted
My stomach is not satisfied
Without thee
I crave the heaven bites
In my mouth
Pizza is the greatest heaven
Pizza Is what I admire most.