honor, courage, and commitment, writing homework help

respond to the 2 classmate posts:

First:

As a Marine, one must possess honor, courage, and commitment, thus honoring past and present Marines who have fought for our freedom.

The technique that I chose to use is to tie all the main key points in each paragraph giving the reader a redo of what they just read.It is not so much as asking question but an informative essay giving the reader knowledge of the basics of being a Marine.

I as a Marine can choose this method due to my firsthand experience in the Marine Corps.I chose to sign the contract and give the Marine Corps 12 years of my life, always trying to do the right thing.There were times when I wanted to give up and take shortcuts, but the moral courage within me and commitment to honor my family and Marine Corps would not allow me to give up.Civilians at times have no idea what the Marine Corps is all about.They at times believe that we are just robots and fight wars.In reality the Marine Corps is much more, it’s a band of brothers that would give up their lives for anybody in this world.Our devotion to make America home of the free is beyond reproach and nobody will understand it unless you are a Marine as well.

Here is the second post:

The changes we experience during our lifetime in regards to our mental health can be complicated. Our bodies and minds grow simultaneously. Over time, we develop ideals for ourselves and we do our best to strive for greatness but sometimes life gets stressful no matter how old we are. All our feelings are equal. Mental health is a real disease that can affect anybody at any stage in life. Research is still being developed about mental health and there are many facilities in existence that we access too. Although we may be affected by illnesses, there is always a way to learn to cope and life our lives as best we can.

I chose to end my essay on a positive note because I believe it is possible to find ways to cope with mental illness. Life shouldn’t be live in sadness and hopelessness all the time. After working with this population of individuals, I have witnessed patients get better and live fulfilling lives. We face many challenges in life and we should never get discourages when our lives get stressful. Life gets overwhelming at times and we feel that we are going crazy we don know what to do. We don’t find answers withdrawing form our feelings, WE hold the solutions to our problems.