i need help to rewrite my lab report

I need help to rewrite my lab report for parts that I got bad points on. So, I attached my orinal lab report and my lab notebook nots as well as the the paper where my teacher showed me where should I rewrite and make it a good report to be submit it for final draft.i attached some of my lab instructure and its as the same as my lab notbook notes but in case my hand writing is not clear and I ADD A GUIDLINE TO FOLLOW.LET ME KNOW IF U HAVE ANY QUESTION